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Post by SaveAWolfxSaveALife on Aug 16, 2008 9:21:46 GMT -5
White lay by Ivy's side as she breathed with her last puffs of air. She had just given birth to four pups. They lay still next to their mother as she slowed her breathing. White looked up at Moonset, who stood next to them with grief struck in her eyes. Ivy was dyeing. "I'm sorry White," Moonset whispered, "She was my friend. Don't think that I don't care." "Why?" White sobbed, "Why can't you do something to help her? She can't die! She is too young!" "White there is nothing I can do." The two were distracted by Ivy as she silenced her breathing. Ivy's heartbeat slowed and everything in her body shut down. "Ivy! No! Stay with me!' White cried. It was too late. Ivy's chest stopped rising and falling and her body went limp. The pups squirmed as if they knew what was occurring. White lay his head down on Ivy's side with tears rolling down his cheeks. Moonset walked away to tell the pack about the horrible news. Ivy lived with the GreatSpirits now. White stared up into the cloudy sky as rain began to fall on them. Ivy's motionless body became soaked underneath the tears of the Spirits. White's ears pricked up as he heard the last words of Ivy echoing in his ears. "Take care, my love. Do not grieve for me, for I am with the Spirits and shall live in peace." The words faded away into the cracking of the rain drops breaking on the ground. Trees stirred in the wind as a new wolf rose to the beyond. White thought he could feel her descending to the heavens of the Spirit's world. There he lay. Next to his dead mate. He heard whimpering beneath him, and remembered there were four pups who needed tend to. Moonset and MotherWolf came back to the motionless body to cary the new born pups back in the shelter of their Clan's camp. Moonset grabbed two pups and ran inside a den, setting then down with ease. White grabbed the other two and left the limp body of Ivy behind. When he reached the camp he noticed grieving eyes all around him. He set the pups down and noticed MotherWolf and Moonset carrying Ivy to dry camp. White stared at her lifeless shape as one last tear rolled down his cheek. Then he turned around and headed back inside his den.
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Post by Sivoncé™ on Aug 16, 2008 10:52:35 GMT -5
This is not where you put this  1. Please read the rules 2. Go into the character bio board and make your characters according to the form 3. go to some of the rp boards and post something like this there. 4. We don't have clans, we have packs |
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Post by SaveAWolfxSaveALife on Aug 16, 2008 14:55:37 GMT -5
i know. It is very fictional. It's hard to take it in but people tell me they like it. By the way, this is only a very small section of my book. and sadly, none of these books are published. thanks for the info. I have never done anything like this, so it's very confusing. You just told me to put a few stories on there, so i did. I was curious of where to put it. Oh, and do I remove this? Or leave it here for ppl to read?  And where are the rules?... ;D |
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Post by Njack on Aug 16, 2008 15:02:17 GMT -5
Dunno if I'm allowed to give info, but I'm pretty sure the rules are on the main page, on the top section that says "Rules". Just click on that, I guess.  |
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Post by SaveAWolfxSaveALife on Aug 16, 2008 15:08:44 GMT -5
ok thx for the detail! XI
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Post by Sheera on Aug 16, 2008 15:18:10 GMT -5
Njack? Why wouldn't you be able? If a member's asking a question and you know the answer, go for it! It doesn't matter if you're a staff or not; you know the question, and you can answer it.
Welcome! I love your story, Siv just thought you had accidently posted an RP here, but we do have packs, so when you do RP remember to say packs(We all make mistakes, and say stuff like 'clans' and I, and most everyone else doesn't do this, used to say 'StarClan' on accident.)!
EDIT:: Go to the Board, 'Rules', and its the most recent post called 'Official Site Rules' read them, live by them, obey them. ^^
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Post by SaveAWolfxSaveALife on Aug 16, 2008 15:59:07 GMT -5
Thanks everyone for the useful advice! I already put a character on the bio boards, but i have no idea if it will be accepted. Anyways, thank you sheera for the advice! I read the rules and read 'about the sight' as well. And just to let ya know, in my book, (That I am writing) actually has Clan's instead of packs, but thank you for the advice! XD
Luv Ya All, So Very Much!
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Post by Sheera on Aug 16, 2008 16:03:52 GMT -5
Yeah, dom't worry, I've nothing against having clans in your book, but remember to say packs when you RP here.
Also:
'Moonset walked away to tell the pack about the horrible news' If you have clan, you may need to change 'pack' to 'clan'
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Post by SaveAWolfxSaveALife on Aug 16, 2008 19:29:23 GMT -5
lol yah. You see, I was planning to say 'pack', but then I forgot and said, 'Clan'!
But of course. I always make mistakes like these. Honestly, I am not the brightest girl in my class! ^^ People say I have
S-L-O-W Syndrome . . . -.-'
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Post by Sheera on Aug 16, 2008 20:47:46 GMT -5
nah, we all make mistakes ^^
Slow syndrome? Thats ridiculous, and obviously they're slow if they think you are. Just tell them to shove there comments in a juice box, and throw them in the trash. -_-'
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